please read instruction 1
-These are 2 examples got good grade please take a look.
-Need to highlight 3 telescoping sentences, 3 freighting sentences, 3 types of dash, melting words. All of these MUST have in the essay.
-ONLY 1 quote per page, the quote more than 3 lines but less than 6 line, need 3 DIFFERENT sources, the quote can’t relate to the paragraph, since we just use the quote to imagine what’s going on not to describe the quote, you can take a look of the example.