business communications revising a persuasive email

The following e-mail message suffers from many writing faults, including poor tone and poor persuasive strategy. It originated with a manager and is addressed to his boss.

Your Task. First, list at least seven of Clint’s writing weaknesses. Then revise the message below implementing an effective persuasive strategy. Include ideas and examples in conducting and participating in productive meetings.

see email attached

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